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Broken Hearted Girl

kim118
kim118 • 93 followers

Daylight drifts in through the curtains,
Through the window panes,
But cannot touch my heart again.

Crying, weeping,
For what has been,
All that I have lost,
Yet again.

Eyes red, saw and tired,
A broken, torn and shattered heart,
Yet to mend but still beating.

You left me like this,
Said "I'll be your friend",
What a lie, such deceit.

Look away and turn around,
Never face what is hard,
Protect your own heart.

Forget me,
I don't matter anymore,
Leave me because as you said -

I don't have a heart to break.

#emotional-poetry #general #heartbreak #lost-love
kim118

@kim118

I've ALWAYS loved how you can get lost in a world someone else has created. Not sure what I'm doing with my life but will just see where it takes me x Hope you like my writing x

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Comments & Feedback (25)

Nom
Nom
Jun 24, 2012 at 12:31 AM

Beautifully sad.

naaviie
naaviie
Jun 24, 2012 at 12:46 AM

Really relate... 💚

kim118
kim118
Jun 24, 2012 at 12:51 AM

@Nom @naaviie Thank you :) Sadly everyone feels this way at some point... 💔 Thanks for your comments x

naaviie
naaviie
Jun 24, 2012 at 12:55 AM

@kim118 oooo you are a Jane Eyre fan too! One of my favourite books 💚💚

Nom
Nom
Jun 24, 2012 at 12:58 AM

@kim118 @naaviie Jane Eyre is overrated 😜

kim118
kim118
Jun 24, 2012 at 12:58 AM

@naaviie Yes I love that story!! So dramatic and romantic! Xx My fave book :)

naaviie
naaviie
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:01 AM

@Nom 😱 naughty boy, I'm gunna slap you!!! 👿 nah, I can't, love you really

naaviie
naaviie
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:01 AM

@kim118 yesssssss!!!! 💚💚💚

Nom
Nom
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:02 AM

@naaviie Wuthering Heights is far more atmospheric!

naaviie
naaviie
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:04 AM

@Nom YUCK I hate that book! I hate stupid cliff man! Eviiiil!!! Stupid people!!!

kim118
kim118
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:05 AM

@naaviie Glad someone agrees! :) @Nom Haha :P It is a work of brilliance, how else could it have lasted from 1847 to now?? :P

kim118
kim118
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:07 AM

@Nom @naaviie Could never get into Wuthering Heights, it's far too 'flowery' with its wording!

Nom
Nom
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:07 AM

@naaviie @kim118 lol, actually I really like Jane Eyre, and I loathe Wutgering Heights! Just being a wind up!

Nom
Nom
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:08 AM

The only Wuthering Heights worth your time is the Kate Bush song!

kim118
kim118
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:08 AM

@Nom How cruel!! Lmao :)

naaviie
naaviie
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:09 AM

@Nom hahahaha so sneaky 😏

Nom
Nom
Jun 24, 2012 at 1:12 AM

@kim118 @naaviie :)

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Jun 24, 2012 at 9:07 AM

A heartwrencher of a write beautifully put💔💔💔💔💔💔

kim118
kim118
Jun 24, 2012 at 9:47 AM

@misslittleDHP Thanks :) xxx

LivingDeadGirl
LivingDeadGirl
Jun 24, 2012 at 9:50 AM

@Nom seriously?! Withering Heights is one of the most brilliant posts ever written! Byronic hero, damsel in distress, death? What more would you want from a romance? It's realism love which to me is the best kind. @kim118 brilliant post by the way, very relatable to many I think we've all experienced heart break. :(

LivingDeadGirl
LivingDeadGirl
Jun 24, 2012 at 9:52 AM

*Wuthering. Sorry for the spelling mistake.

kim118
kim118
Jun 24, 2012 at 9:53 AM

@LivingDeadGirl Good point well made! Lol Thank you by the way 😊

gazplend
gazplend
Jun 24, 2012 at 10:11 AM

@kim118 great piece,hope your ok?!?! 😘😘😘

kim118
kim118
Jun 24, 2012 at 10:22 AM

@gazplend Thanks and yeah I am ok :)

LivingDeadGirl
LivingDeadGirl
Jun 24, 2012 at 11:15 AM

@kim118 no problem, this is a great piece.

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