Old and rusty,
Decrepid and daunting
Neglected swing
Haunts the park.
A little girl steps through the gate,
Cautiously peering behind her,
Her bottom lip trembling,
She sits on the damp, dirty seat,
Her tiny hands clasp the battered chain,
She swings her legs forward......... SHE'S GONE?!
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Comments & Feedback (18)
@lauraessex This is lovely, well done! ☺ it is sad when someone feels they should leave negative comments, I hope you can ignore them, @powderpuff seems an unhappy girl, it's a shame.
@crowncottage thank you 😘 anyway @powderpuff doesn't like writing and only joined opuss because it was made by facebook she has stopped going on it.
@lauraessex you are welcome! Opuss wasn't made by Facebook, it was made by Seamonster, why did she think that? 😱 I think Opuss has an account on Facebook but that's all 😄
@lauraessex don't be downhearted. @powderpuff is clearly being rude and immature. Take no notice, everyone else loves it. 😄
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