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Whisper

A whisper to the heart,
Emotions blind,
One would think,
That she was kind.

She draws you in,
Steals your soul,
Buries your body,
Into a deep dirt hole.

A whisper to the heart is all it takes,
A whisper and then your mind will break.

jan3601

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Comments & Feedback (6)

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It's good and full of hope, but it's pitiful too, if that makes any sense? 😌

@crowncottage I think I get what you mean, thanks for the feedback

Thanks for the entry! But next time tag me in the comments? 😉😊

@Janflower sorry, forgot

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