Just a whisper,
Just one word,
Hope the whole world,
Hasn't heard.
Just a secret,
Please don't tell,
If you do,
It won't end well.
Just a whisper,
Just one word,
Hope the whole world,
Hasn't heard.
Just a secret,
Please don't tell,
If you do,
It won't end well.
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Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
There's a reject Who's sure All that's better is best And he's buying a doorway, to a new life #youngwritershousehold @awritergirl.
#youngwritershousehold A crimson field, Full of blood, Men dying, A ruby flood. A crimson sky, Reflecting on, All that bloodshed, Under midday sun.
#youngwritershousehold. Open your mind. Whisper your thoughts. Tell me your secrets. And we'll work out your knots. Open your mind. Free your spirit. Listen to the music. Even if you can't hear it.
Fighting, gasping, For oxygen. Struggling, battling, For oxygen. Grasping, praying, For oxygen. Oxygen, a blessing, A gift we must treasure. Oxygen, a curse, Stolen away forever.
Whisper to me, Behind closed doors, Not that it means much. Even if it was Behind opened doors, It wouldn't be important as such. The fact that you whisper, The fact that you don't care...
#youngwritershousehold In murky waters, Seek me below. Where the oxygen's sparse, And the water does flow. You cease to breathe, And that's when I know... There's something beneath, Way down low..
Oxygen, Breath, Without it, Death. Breathing, Slow, It helps me, Go. Oxygen, Decides, Who lives, And who dies. #youngwritershousehold.
Just a heads up I will be judging the young writers house hold on the 10th. Same time, 10:00pm (GMT) please repost this so that everybody knows.
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