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abyss

So tell me lies!
Don't give me proof
Mirror
You have shown me, old
As you stare, lifeless
Black and cold
Mirror, fragile
Yet so strong
You held me captive
For so long
For in reflections
Deepest glare
I know there is
Nobody there
Mirror
Your abyss is deep
Fathomless
Secrets you keep
Freedom then
Will never be
While your abyss
Stares back at me...

leelee101

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Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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Comments & Feedback (21)

Brilliant! I love this!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜‰πŸ˜œ

Love it fantastic writing as usual Lee πŸ˜˜πŸ’œ

Brill!! Really good. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@Janflower thank u! πŸ‘β€

@sara_lou thank you sweety. And β˜•β€ for the RP πŸ‘πŸ’‹

@MelchiorJ13 thanks jack β˜• and thank u for reposting sir πŸ‘πŸ˜‰

Love it β€πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@sjw thank u sweety πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@sjw thank you for reposting sienna, appreciate that hun β€β€β€πŸ’‹

Fabulous!!! Loved the quick pace. Really captures your "anger" at the mirror- stupid mirrors! πŸ˜‰

@ckahn thanks kristina, yeah he starts angry and gradually realises he can't do too much... ❀ thank u for the RP too πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Brilliant, I feel your rage against all of mirror-kind! I'm with you, we should go on a smashing spree 😠😜

@Irrational_Kimmi haha! Cheers hunny. ❀ I'm in! πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

I love itπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€β€β€

@sarahgamal thank you hunny ❀ muchly appreciated RP sweety πŸ‘β€πŸ’‹

Really love this and can soooooooo feel this oneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@misslittleDHP thank u Kim my lovely! ❀ A big πŸ’‹ smackeroo for the RP 😍❀

This so good. I look forward to reading your posts. Highlight of my day. πŸ’œπŸŒ™πŸ’™πŸŒŸπŸ’œβœ¨πŸ’›

@sleepydragon Diana you are too kind. But I luv ya for it! Thank you hunny appreciate that πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€β€β€πŸŒΈπŸŒΈπŸ’‹πŸ‘

Lovely words πŸŒ€πŸ‘πŸ‘

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