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Scratching the Surface.

a skin weathered by time,
when it should portray your youth?

Does it show your inner depths
the life you've led.
A path travelled where you've left your steps,
the places you've laid your head?

Does it show the laugh's, the tears,
your experiences.
the sadness or how you conquered fears?
No, it's just a reflection in a MIRROR.

sjw

@sjw

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Great stuff hunny πŸ‘β€πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

This is absolutely amazing πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒŸβœ¨πŸŒŸβœ¨πŸŒŸβœ¨

Clever! πŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒŸ

I love this! Brilliant 😍

@leelee101 thank you hun and have some 🍻🍻for the RP 😘

@MelchiorJ13 wow thanks for that lovely comment and πŸ’‹for the RP 😊

@ckahn mwaah lovely lady and thank you for the RP πŸ˜˜πŸ’

@minxyMolly thanks for the RP β€β€πŸ’—

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks Kimmi and πŸ’‹for the RP 😊

@sarahgamal thanks for the RP hun πŸ˜˜πŸ’

This is a superb write Sienna...really wonderful πŸ’šπŸ’—πŸ’šπŸ’—

Excellent write. Really enjoyed it. πŸŒ™πŸ’œπŸŒŸπŸ’™βœ¨πŸ’™πŸŒ™

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@misslittleDHP @sleepydragon @RichWithey thank you all so much for your lovely comments, your too kind ❀😍😘

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