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leelee101
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() Light a candle
| | Lift the gloom
| | Place one inside
| | Every room
Pictures form
In dancing flame
Light, it's nature
() A shadowgame
| | Bathed inside
| | Its eerie glow
| | Flickering fire
A melting flow
Don't breathe too hard
Else snuff it out
Curse the dark
When candle's out...

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#shape(ish)poetry

#atmosphere #darkness #general #meditation #poetry #shape #symbolism
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Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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Twilight Time

Afternoon done end of the sun. Time for evenings magic to be spun. The blue of the day has gone away. Claret and purple are holding sway. Warm and swollen the start of the night.

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Weirdwolf
Weirdwolf
Nov 14, 2012 at 9:51 AM

Imagine a time when candles where the only light, that's what this piece makes me do. Cool. 😃👍🔥

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 10:06 AM

@Weirdwolf what a lovely thought that is mate. 👍 Thanks for reposting sir ☕🐷🍞👏

glen
glen
Nov 14, 2012 at 10:58 AM

Wow another magic eye poster to look at 😃😂

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 11:30 AM

@glen 😂😂😂 What can you make of this one mate? 👍

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 11:31 AM

@glen thanks for reposting fella 🍻🍻

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 11:32 AM

@sara_lou appreciate that RP hunny ❤ thank u 👍🌹

glen
glen
Nov 14, 2012 at 11:40 AM

@leelee101 ha it looks a bit like a map of England 😃😂

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 11:46 AM

@glen 😂😂 that's what all those repost beers have done to you mate! 👍

sjw
sjw
Nov 14, 2012 at 12:20 PM

Love this and love candles 👏👏👏😘

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 12:30 PM

@sjw thank u sie 👍❤🌹

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 12:31 PM

@sjw @Jamtots thank you both for reposting 👍👏👏

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Nov 14, 2012 at 4:52 PM

Clever Hun...I likey 👏👏❤❤❤👏👏

eddie12309
eddie12309
Nov 14, 2012 at 5:20 PM

Lovely. They do look like candles but last one could double for an item if ladies hygiene. 😂😂👍☕

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 5:35 PM

@eddie12309 ha ha! 😂😂 Cheers hun, I see what u mean! ❤ ☕™, of course👍

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 5:36 PM

@eddie12309 haha! 😂😂 Cheers hun, I see what u mean! 👍❤

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 5:37 PM

@Janflower thanks for reposting 👍❤

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 5:49 PM

@misslittleDHP thanks Kim appreciate that hun ❤ big 💋 for the RP too 👍

RichWithey
RichWithey
Nov 14, 2012 at 6:41 PM
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leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 6:46 PM

@RichWithey cheers amigo, only every now and then. I get tired... 😂😂😂 Repost beers for Mr. Withey! 🍻🍻🍻

leelee101
leelee101
Nov 14, 2012 at 9:25 PM

@sarahgamal thank you for reposting Sarah hunny 👍❤🌹

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