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Here's a bunch of words, random, seemingly
Cobbled together to form some halfassed poetry
It isn't quite The Ilyad, not exactly perfect prose
But what on earth will please you, God only knows
I've used only normal words so that it's easy to read
You may find it rather pleasant instead of bleating in the feed
Icanspeeditrightup
Or....I.....can.....slow......it......down......
The idea that is inherent is to turn a frown around
I can write pretty much whatever I choose
I can turn your judgement around...oh yes, you'll lose...
So complain for complainings sake, if it quite suiteth thee
I like to keep things simple. Yeah, that'll do for me...

leelee101

@leelee101

Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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I feel like I've missed something ๐Ÿ˜

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@Irrational_Kimmi Me too! I get the gist though Lee....๐Ÿ˜‰

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Hear hear! Simple's nice ๐Ÿ˜Šโค

@Irrational_Kimmi @Fly10 search a piece called all too simple by jessep15. All will become clear. ๐Ÿ‘โค

@leelee101 I've read it...how rude and judgemental from a master of mediocrity

I've read it, but can't quite work out who/what it's directed at? Maybe he means the Twitter/Facebook stuff that many of us would prefer not to read? I'll be interested to hear his comments anyway! Although there is another of his pieces 'Disagree' which is a little confrontational....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜

I'm up to speed now....we were assassinated by a genius I'm afraid

@sammielee46 thanks for the RP sweetheart ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@Fly10 I just get the feeling it's a pointless supposed rant saying that we're all crap writers. I'll be surprised if they comment Leigh tbh ๐Ÿ‘โค

@patdolan83 genius indeed Pat. Cheers for reposting fella ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

@Fly10 thanks for the RP Leigh ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@Irrational_Kimmi you know it hunnybunchโ„ข ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โค

@Delilah nice one D. ๐Ÿ‘ Thanks for the RP hun โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@Klaire cheers hun. ๐Ÿ‘ And thanks for reposting too โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@sarahgamal like that one Sarah? ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‚ Thanks for the RP babe ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks for the RP sweety ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@Fly10 I've just had a look at 'Disagree' and some of his/her others. I think the Laureates office is safe for a while. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Well worth ignoring. But you know me, I was always gonna write this piece after seeing his post. ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 yes very ๐Ÿ˜Š I tend to write in simple words . Maybe my vocabulary isn't that grand (English as second language) or maybe I just like if simple

@sarahgamal simple is better for everyone hun. ๐Ÿ‘โค

@jackalice thanks for the RP bud ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

@Fly10 - that is EXACTLY what I was referring to. @leelee101 simple words are best, but you and many others create something deeper with their use. THAT is what makes you and many others great writers. @leelee101 show me another as good as yours... And I'll show you ten that do not come close.

Ive gotta admit I'm chuckling a little at the irony, because I read it just another attack on the quotes/tweeters, of it wasn't as vague it would prob be in top ten rather than causing debate? Maybe that is its point? Prob not, since a previous 'the low road' has a dig at quoters.. @Fly10 the tone of disagree made me think about Too Simple differently. The posters has never posted anything remotely racist and, to me, it seems to be a satirical swipe at those that do, written from their perspective?

๐Ÿ˜‚ I posted my previous comment before I saw @jessep15 's reply.. The irony ๐Ÿ˜‚

@jessep15 I think your 10-1 rule is inversed.. Check out the top 100 and you will realise that

@leelee101 YAAAAY I'm a simple writer!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ˜„ read that lee and can imagine a rap to go with it!! Think cuz it reminds me of something eminem might do! โค๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

@jessep15 thanks for the compliment, but it's not about who can create great stuff and who can't. Sure I like to think I'm able to create pretty good stuff, but a lot of my pieces are for fun, and could never really hold up as something great. Your post unfortunately comes across as a bit of an attack on all Opuss users. Of course some users are better than others, but they are only opinions, which vary from user to user and are on the whole best kept to ourselves. I may hold high rank, but that means nothing when I look and read other Opuss users that are better writers than me. ๐Ÿ‘

@Burrfoot not as it applies as I reference his

@Burrfoot there seems to be a strange argument here doesn't there? Surely this guy can easily see there's authors and pieces better than me here. ๐Ÿ‘

@Burrfoot thanks for the RP fella ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

@Burrfoot sure the top 100.... Out of literally tens of thousands.

@jessep15 you're deluded if you think there's more than 150 even semi regular posters on here

@minxyMolly aw I wouldn't say you're a simple writer, MM ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@jessep15 LOOKIE HERE. We love to write. We do it for fun. We do it to get our emotions out. We do it to share. We write happy, sad, angry, funny, etc. posts. Not for ONLY YOU. If you don't like them, well so be it. Deal with it and tough bananas. Ok? We don't have to fit your wants in our writing. I'm only 11 but I love to write like a lot of other KIDS on here. Too simple you say? For Pete's sake, the youngest on here is probably in fifth or sixth grade. Maybe even fourth. There's people from other countries on here. Take for instance @sarahgamel She's from Egypt and English is her second language. She doesn't have to use antidisetablishmentarianism in her story or poem ok? So back off. @leelee101 I might've gone a little over the top... But still.

@Klaire gotta have your say hun, feel free! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โค

@leelee101 ๐Ÿ˜‚ k thanks

@minxyMolly thanks for the RP MM ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’‹

@Klaire ๐Ÿ‘ most everything will have been enjoyed by someone

@Burrfoot Yep. Exactly. Nobodyq writes for just one person. They write because they love it. (Unless some guy is trying to impress his girlfriend) ๐Ÿ˜‚

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@leelee101 awww mwah and big hugs lee! Can I get this on paper as proof to my teachers! XX

@minxyMolly take a screenshot and show 'em babes! ๐Ÿ‘โคโค

@leelee101 good idea โค wonder if it's too late to prove I still have a brain in there somewhere! My one teacher already believes it went missing with my voice!

@minxyMolly shake your head about, MM, that should prove to them there's something left in there! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚โคโคโค๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ’‹

@leelee101 shakes head all I can hear is pencil stubs and ink dried pens from so much use on Opuss! โคโค๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 just a random cray thought lee if you're coming to the Opuss meet and I can make it as well I'm gonna bring you a fake crown...maybe draw some black paw prints on it ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘โค

@minxyMolly haha! Make it fur lined and I'll wear it sweety! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I do

@minxyMolly grrrrr....I'll continue.... I do love it when you breeze through her MM โคโคโค๐Ÿ˜˜

@tetti2 appreciate the lovely RP Terri ๐Ÿ‘ thank you โค

@leelee101 your welcome ๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 hehehe and it'll be a grand old ยฃ5 max crown :3 I'm a tad down on the dosh atm lee lol xx

@minxyMolly I'll just make do with this one ๐Ÿ‘‘ sweety ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@RichWithey appreciate that RP amigo ๐Ÿ‘ cheers ๐Ÿป๐Ÿป

@LiSaC64 thanks for the lovely RP Lisa ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

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