Here's a bunch of words, random, seemingly
Cobbled together to form some halfassed poetry
It isn't quite The Ilyad, not exactly perfect prose
But what on earth will please you, God only knows
I've used only normal words so that it's easy to read
You may find it rather pleasant instead of bleating in the feed
Icanspeeditrightup
Or....I.....can.....slow......it......down......
The idea that is inherent is to turn a frown around
I can write pretty much whatever I choose
I can turn your judgement around...oh yes, you'll lose...
So complain for complainings sake, if it quite suiteth thee
I like to keep things simple. Yeah, that'll do for me...
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@Irrational_Kimmi @Fly10 search a piece called all too simple by jessep15. All will become clear. ๐โค
I've read it, but can't quite work out who/what it's directed at? Maybe he means the Twitter/Facebook stuff that many of us would prefer not to read? I'll be interested to hear his comments anyway! Although there is another of his pieces 'Disagree' which is a little confrontational....๐๐
@Fly10 I just get the feeling it's a pointless supposed rant saying that we're all crap writers. I'll be surprised if they comment Leigh tbh ๐โค
@Fly10 I've just had a look at 'Disagree' and some of his/her others. I think the Laureates office is safe for a while. ๐๐ Well worth ignoring. But you know me, I was always gonna write this piece after seeing his post. ๐โค๐
@leelee101 yes very ๐ I tend to write in simple words . Maybe my vocabulary isn't that grand (English as second language) or maybe I just like if simple
@Fly10 - that is EXACTLY what I was referring to. @leelee101 simple words are best, but you and many others create something deeper with their use. THAT is what makes you and many others great writers. @leelee101 show me another as good as yours... And I'll show you ten that do not come close.
Ive gotta admit I'm chuckling a little at the irony, because I read it just another attack on the quotes/tweeters, of it wasn't as vague it would prob be in top ten rather than causing debate? Maybe that is its point? Prob not, since a previous 'the low road' has a dig at quoters.. @Fly10 the tone of disagree made me think about Too Simple differently. The posters has never posted anything remotely racist and, to me, it seems to be a satirical swipe at those that do, written from their perspective?
@leelee101 YAAAAY I'm a simple writer!! ๐๐๐๐ read that lee and can imagine a rap to go with it!! Think cuz it reminds me of something eminem might do! โค๐๐๐๐
@jessep15 thanks for the compliment, but it's not about who can create great stuff and who can't. Sure I like to think I'm able to create pretty good stuff, but a lot of my pieces are for fun, and could never really hold up as something great. Your post unfortunately comes across as a bit of an attack on all Opuss users. Of course some users are better than others, but they are only opinions, which vary from user to user and are on the whole best kept to ourselves. I may hold high rank, but that means nothing when I look and read other Opuss users that are better writers than me. ๐
@Burrfoot there seems to be a strange argument here doesn't there? Surely this guy can easily see there's authors and pieces better than me here. ๐
@jessep15 LOOKIE HERE. We love to write. We do it for fun. We do it to get our emotions out. We do it to share. We write happy, sad, angry, funny, etc. posts. Not for ONLY YOU. If you don't like them, well so be it. Deal with it and tough bananas. Ok? We don't have to fit your wants in our writing. I'm only 11 but I love to write like a lot of other KIDS on here. Too simple you say? For Pete's sake, the youngest on here is probably in fifth or sixth grade. Maybe even fourth. There's people from other countries on here. Take for instance @sarahgamel She's from Egypt and English is her second language. She doesn't have to use antidisetablishmentarianism in her story or poem ok? So back off. @leelee101 I might've gone a little over the top... But still.
@Burrfoot Yep. Exactly. Nobodyq writes for just one person. They write because they love it. (Unless some guy is trying to impress his girlfriend) ๐
@leelee101 good idea โค wonder if it's too late to prove I still have a brain in there somewhere! My one teacher already believes it went missing with my voice!
@minxyMolly shake your head about, MM, that should prove to them there's something left in there! ๐๐โคโคโค๐๐๐
@leelee101 shakes head all I can hear is pencil stubs and ink dried pens from so much use on Opuss! โคโค๐๐
@leelee101 just a random cray thought lee if you're coming to the Opuss meet and I can make it as well I'm gonna bring you a fake crown...maybe draw some black paw prints on it ๐๐๐โค
@leelee101 hehehe and it'll be a grand old ยฃ5 max crown :3 I'm a tad down on the dosh atm lee lol xx
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