Angel, Devil, which is best?
A bona fide lover's test
If he is the one for you
You'll have your fights, all couples do
If though, you decide to stray
You may just throw it all away
It probably isn't all that nice
To have a stranger spout advice
But ask yourself, could you stand
To never hold his loving hand?
So pick a path, it's yours to choose
But pick it wisely, or you may lose...
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@sjw @smellyfingers thank u both. It's just small advice, it's hers to do with as she sees fit. Don't like to see people upset. π
@leelee101 ; thank you for the advice and the poem π I'm not implying I would stray, it's about an incident last year that keeps getting brought up in arguments π argh but that you for this, it's lovely and good advice ππ
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