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Suicide

Red ink,
Or maybe pink?

Convincing myself it's not blood,
But more likely red mud,

It could be paint?
No. Now I feel faint,

Life is one big stage,
But you never even came of age,

For I know now,
You took your last bow,

Your performance ended,
You needed to be mended,

But nobody knew,
And now I'm left with just a memory of you.

madaboutmarinelife

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Comments & Feedback (9)

Sorry again guys, I'm just trying out writing poetry, not very good at it so ya know :L x

Such an emotional piece. Hope it is not where you are, but just a piece you wrote

BTW it is a very good work! πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

Lovely work...i hope its not true though

@Lovinmalamutes @KikuHonda thankyou (: no, it's not real, just some things I was thinking about and I came to this :L x

Jasmin, that takes a load off my mind. I can relate to having times of feeling that low I just didn't want you feeling that low when we're all around here and we do care!

My comments always post half way through, or so. I am somehow causing the posting to happen but I haven't figured out how to stop it. Lol so now you know I'm not computer savvy at all. Lol πŸ‘ 😊 πŸ‘Ό

@Lovinmalamutes thankyou, no I was just talking to someone who was suicidal, and then this came to

Ack, mine always post halfway through too -.- as I was saying, I talked her out of it, but this just came to mind :L 😊 I'm not computer savvy either haha x

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