Unaccepted Solace

heyimkate • 247 followers

There is no existence left. I no longer belong.
I'm going down,
down
down
I can't see anything, it's so quiet and lonely,
Ever since you've been gone,
I've been gone too.
My body remains, but my soul does not,
It seeks something better,
Something to give me strength.
But I cannot receive,
I'll shake off all the comforts from my peers.
I cannot let go of you,
It would be as if you never existed,
And I can't go on knowing that I pushed you out of my mind.
I seek solace, but I'll die before I accept.
One day, you'll have to come back, and I'll be able to cure the hole in my heart.

#100days @madhatter
5: Seeking Solace.
(I know it kind of bends the rules...)

#100days #emotional-trauma #general #grief #introspection #loss #poetry

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Comments & Feedback (2)

Jul 11, 2012 at 2:44 PM

No, i loved it, and it's amazing :) i'm telling you, it's not Writing Bootcamp, rules were made to be bended and broken :)

Jul 11, 2012 at 6:29 PM

@madhatter Thank you!! Hehe!! 😊

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