Disconnect

I like this. The not quite matching rhymes help add to the feeling of being disconnected.

@Nom thanks for always seeing/inferring something from my work. And I actually wrote it in such a way because I'm feeling a little disconnected myself.

Really do get a sense of disconnection from this - great write!

Awesome mate 😜😜😜😜⛵👌

@milkeyedmender I wrote a poem like this called 'Detached' where I felt the same. It's an odd feeling.

@naaviie @glen the both of you are too kind really, thank you😊

@Nom Yeah definitely. Mine feels a little like I'm sitting on the fence between lacking of inspiration to still having something to vomit out into writing.

@milkeyedmender haha sorry, the vomiting bit made me chuckle 😜

@naaviie 😄 well, don't you chuckle at just the strangest things!

Definayely got a sense of disconnecting really good piece ☺

@milkeyedmender ever so true. It will pass, just hope you fall onto the right side of the fence!

Thank you @sjw ☺I'm glad you felt it too

Ah, I certainly hope so too! Thanks @Nom

Really great write😃😃😃

I can only hope so @misslittleDHP 😄 thank you for the repost!😊

The last two lines summarise the 'disconnected' state of

The last two lines summarise the disconnected state of mind perfectly. Great piece😌

Wow, what a piece! Love it.

@milkeyedmender love this! Great words 👍😘

@Fly10 @juttaghold @gazplend I think this was an accidental piece but I'm glad you all liked it 😊 And really thank you so much for the repost @Fly10 and @gazplend !😄