Let Me Fix You Something

milkeyedmender • 195 followers

Let me fix your heart
For the art they did not see
Let me fix your part
In this poem I wrote for thee

Let me fix your soul
From the voices that stole its passion
Let me fix you a goal
And give you some direction.

Let me fix your hair
In mornings when you wake
Let me fix your lair,
Everyone needs a break!

Let me fix you meals,
Weetbix, milk and honey
Let me fix your bills,
For you I'd give plenty.

Lastly, let me fix you something
Something that's a part of me,
A part I have been wanting to give you,
For the days you helped me see.

#care #devotion #emotional-support #love-poem #rhyme

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glen

May 9, 2012 at 1:22 AM

I like it 📝👍👍👍

michga

May 9, 2012 at 1:32 AM

This is very beautiful!❤

milkeyedmender

May 9, 2012 at 1:45 AM

@glensaggs @michga thank you wonderful people! It was a pleasure for me to write this!☺

Stablish

May 9, 2012 at 1:52 AM

@milkeyedmender I love it too, thanks for sharing😊

milkeyedmender

May 9, 2012 at 1:54 AM

@Stablish thank you! Something light-hearted finally! 😄

kivihe

May 9, 2012 at 2:57 AM

Love it! Great rhyme contains what I needed :)

milkeyedmender

May 9, 2012 at 3:04 AM

@kivihe I'm really glad to know that ☺

foxy2178

May 9, 2012 at 3:48 AM

Hey is this based on something real or fictional, pu

foxy2178

May 9, 2012 at 3:49 AM

Sorry, just out of curiosity! Left handed texting whilst toothbrushing! ;)

milkeyedmender

May 9, 2012 at 4:05 AM

@foxy2178 haha what talent you have, it's real. (: I wrote it for someone really close to my heart that is currently going through a rough time in her life.

foxy2178

May 9, 2012 at 4:27 AM

Well, I've just spent the last 9 months (ongoing) in the receiving side of that kind of support and, when things really get dark and start to close in around me, it's this love, kindness and never ending support that's got me through it. I've never felt such pain and such warmth so close together before...but I don't think you ever really do until something so dramatically life changing happens to you whereby you actually have a reason to. Sorry, I've been up for two days so my eyes and words are failing me! You're doing a really good thing, most people like the diffusion of responsibility as they don't need to go through that suffering too. X

milkeyedmender

May 9, 2012 at 4:53 AM

@foxy2178 You have no idea how much that really means to me, that my writings can reach out to people and help them. I have had many lapses in my life before, but just like you i had a good family and friends and a partner that never gave up on me. I just hope that you know that, You are brave and that you gave yourself a chance that you have never stopped deserving ; a chance to be happy and better. I hope you get to your destination and stay strong! (: and next time you comment me, maybe you could brush your teeth and use your right hand instead☺ now go get some sleep!