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misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP • 739 followers

In a place I dared to go
My mind has merged with my heart
Visions of you sit there
From your beautiful face I cannot part

I kept you as my secret
You captivated me so very deep
I've locked you away
From the view of others you will keep

You consume me whole
I live, eat, sleep, and breathe only you
We are impossible together
This realisation is bleakly true

I'll weep every night
Knowing we can never truly be
Back into my secret place
You will forever be close to me

©Kim Brown 5th February 2013

#emotional-poetry #forbidden-relationship #general #unrequited-love
misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (26)

eddie12309
eddie12309
Feb 5, 2013 at 8:42 PM

Deep and emotional. Hope your ok?💚😘

sarahgamal
sarahgamal
Feb 5, 2013 at 8:42 PM

😢 Beautiful and hope u r ok😘

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 5, 2013 at 8:45 PM

@eddie12309 @sarahgamal @minxyMolly...thanking you my sweets for the RP's ...all ok my end..except an awful cold with a darn cough 😘🌹💝🍸💐

minxyMolly
minxyMolly
Feb 5, 2013 at 8:47 PM

@misslittleDHP oh dear hope you get well soon Kim!! ❤❤😉 fabbo poem!

sarahgamal
sarahgamal
Feb 5, 2013 at 8:48 PM

@misslittleDHP ohhhh hope u feel better soon. Sending you lots of hugs 💪💪💪💪💪

leelee101
leelee101
Feb 5, 2013 at 9:02 PM

Missed you, madam ❤ glad you're ok. 👍 Love this Kim, and feel better soon my lovely 👍❤❤❤😘

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 5, 2013 at 9:03 PM

@leelee101 I miss you more handsome...💋✨💋✨💋

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 5, 2013 at 9:04 PM

@leelee101 big smackeroos for the RP 💋😘💋😘💋😘💋

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 5, 2013 at 9:05 PM

@sjw...thanking you gorgeous for the kind RP 🌹🍸💝

leelee101
leelee101
Feb 5, 2013 at 9:14 PM

@misslittleDHP I am sooooooo gonna collect all these smackeroos, you do know that... 💋💋

Burrfoot
Burrfoot
Feb 5, 2013 at 9:36 PM

💪💪 captured perfectly 👍

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 5, 2013 at 9:56 PM

@Burrfoot thanking you kindly Mr Burr for the RP ...big huggies for you 💪💪💪💪💪💪😘😘

sleepydragon
sleepydragon
Feb 5, 2013 at 10:01 PM

@misslittleDHP excellent write. Get well soon. ✨🌟✨☕💊

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 5, 2013 at 10:18 PM

@sleepydragon awww bless you my sweet...I could do with that pill 😂😂😂...a big huggie for the RP 💪💪💪💪🌹😘

michga
michga
Feb 5, 2013 at 10:50 PM

Excellent!!😘😘😘👌

Stablish
Stablish
Feb 5, 2013 at 10:54 PM

Great write Kim💜😘💙😘

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 6, 2013 at 12:16 AM

@michga @Stablish thanking both you gorgeous peeps for the lovely RP ❤😘❤

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 6, 2013 at 4:02 PM

@lucylilac...big huggies for the kind RP 💪💪💪🌹💐💝

lucylilac
lucylilac
Feb 6, 2013 at 4:05 PM

Are you a boy? Sorry for asking....

lucylilac
lucylilac
Feb 6, 2013 at 4:05 PM

@misslittleDHP

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 6, 2013 at 4:07 PM

@lucylilac last time I checked I was def a girl! 😂😂😂😂

lucylilac
lucylilac
Feb 6, 2013 at 4:16 PM

Hahaha. Just making sure ( if you were a boy ) that you weren't trying to be my online boyfriend. I have had that happen... It's not as amazing as some might thing. I'm only 12.

lucylilac
lucylilac
Feb 6, 2013 at 4:16 PM

Check out my stories!!

lucylilac
lucylilac
Feb 6, 2013 at 4:16 PM

@misslittleDHP

HingAling24
HingAling24
Feb 6, 2013 at 10:28 PM

There's someone on Opuss called unknown future she may need some some helpful words of wisdom from all of us..😞😢 pretty bad

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Feb 8, 2013 at 1:00 PM

@beergrylles...thanking you handsome for the kind RP 💝😘☺

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