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Forgiveness

Is forgiveness given or taken?
Will past hurts sleep or awaken?

Can you relent, so others find solace?
Can you offer it fully or an empty promise?

Do you dismiss from your mind
Wrongs of the worst done by mankind?

Erase past wrongs, abandon your feelings?
To forgive, leaves you dying as they are healing

In a river of forgiveness you are barely buoyant
Can't look absolution in the eye, a forgiving front

Must you lie to yourself to make others feel peace?
Should you excuse them or put yourself at ease?

I have not all the answers, I only can ask
Can all the hurt ever truly be left to rest in the past?

©Kim Brown 19th September 2012

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Comments & Feedback (15)

Succinct, loved this! 👏👏👏

Love it Kim 👏👏👏😍😘💋

You've really captured the feeling here. 👏👏👏😘👍💚

@MrsS @smellyfingers thanking you muchly you gorgeous peeps and for the reposts...🎁🎁🎁🎁🌹🌹🌹🌹

Nice one Kim, a tricky subject sometimes. ❤Well done hun 👍😘🌹

Love this..something to ponder on..excellent write! 👍🌟😊🌺🌹🌸

Not sure which is easier or comes first.. Forgive or forget? Great write 👍

A good question captured perfectly love it 💐💐😘

@leelee101 @softwhispers @sjw thanking you all for your thoughtful comments...mwah 😘😘😘😘

@Augustus @sjw @Burrfoot @leelee101 ....thanks all for the kind reposts 💚✨💚✨💚

@Burrfoot exactly Hun....is it easier to forgive or forget...it's a lot to ask of someone at times...💚💚💚💚

@eddie12309 thanking you kindly lovely lady...a flower for the welcomed RP too 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

@misslittleDHP love it

@nala416 thanking you my lovely...very kind 😘😘

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