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Heaven Scent???

At the age of 36, a dear friend to me was lost
To an aggressive form of cancer, I was sad and cross

Why take such a sweet, friendly, caring and happy guy?
Who had such a big heart, we all kept asking WHY?

I spoke to you about a week before you passed away
Although you were down, you still chatted about your day

When I went to your funeral I sat close to our mutual friend
Just to have her beside me, gave me an inner strength

At the end of the funeral your family walked on by
I felt this breeze upon my face, I let out, a weak cry

With the breeze it carried the scent of you
It was an invisible wash of your smell, I didn't know what to do?

I just gasped, choking back the tears
My friend could see all my fears

I was shaken and left as soon as I could
In hindsight I was spooked and I had misunderstood

I now know you were just letting me know you were there
Telling me you were ok, just like you, to still care

I regret my actions on that day
But I still think of you Wick, that's all I wanted to say

©Kim Brown 28th October 2012

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (23)

@Diddle....😘😘

Oh this poem broke my heart...honestly very moving and such a lovely and warming thing for you to have with you. Your actions that day were only normal, don't feel regret towards them. A heart warming poem, loved it 👏👏😘😘💓💓🌟🌟🌟✨🌟💝💝💐💐

@oushie12 thankayoo very muchly my sweet for the kind RP 😘✨❤

❤❤😢😢 beautiful Kim!! Absolutely moving xx

@misslittleDHP That's absolutely gorgeous, so so sad, @oushie12 I completely agree ! 😓😘

@oushie12 @minxyMolly oh I hope I haven't made you lovely ladies sad...although it was a knee jerk reaction and one I could kick myself over and over again...I feel blessed to have experienced Wickham at his funeral, he passed 9 years ago and I still haven't took off his mobile number from my mobile...strange but true...THANKYOU for your wonderful comments my lovelies 😘🌹😘🌹

@Diddle awwww thanking you my sweet...I've had many strange things happen but this was one that truly touched me ....I so appreciate your comments Hun 😘✨😘✨😘

@minxyMolly @Diddle a flower my sweets for the RP's 🌺🌺

@misslittleDHP aw bless you, no, not strange to keep his number at all, something sentimental I guess 😞😘😘😘😘😘😘

Very sad and beautiful too and I don't think you acted any differently to anyone would have in that situation big hugs hun 😘😓💐✨✨✨

This is so sad! I'm sorry about the loss of your friend 😥

Awww... Sad but lovely too Kim 👍❤❤❤🌹

@sjw @leelee101 thanking you my lovely friends...big huggies for the RP's 😘✨💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

@Geeabc98 thanks my sweet for your comment Hun 🌹🌹

@LittleMissSam...thanking you my sweet for the kind RP 😘✨😘

Aaaaaw, this is beautiful Kim - and I'm sure he's got your message 💓💓💓😘

@MrsS awww thanking you so much my sweet...and flowers and chocs for that RP 💝🌹

My brother's girlfriends father (who is close to my family anyways) has stage four irreversible brain cancer, he's 41(maybe younger) and his daughters are 8 and 17. It's so sad, especially when you knew the person 😢💔

@AWriterGirl heartbreaking news...big hugs...sometimes things don't make sense do they?...so terribly sad 💔💔😘😘

@AWriterGirl a flower for the kind RP 🌹🌺🌹

@onedirection19....big huggies for that lovely RP my sweet 💪💪💪💪💪😘🌹

Beautiful tribute to your lovely friend, such a heartwarming message ❤ hugs for you 💪💪💪

@onedirection19 thanks my sweet ✨💛✨

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