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The water is pushing me down and I cant breathe. I huff and blow but its no use. I cough and splutter and fill my cheeks with air. I am frozen and I lose my strength. I am winded, I can't breathe. A huge wave pours over me and makes me sink below. My life is over

Thanks to @meggie2012 she inspired me to do this!

mpallister24

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Comments & Feedback (6)

@Meggie2012 is my best friend

@awesomeannie is she

@mpallister24 Yay! I was mentioned in a comment

Sorry, I mean opuss.

This is great by the way!!

@meggie2012 thanks

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