Tide is rough
Water deep
Blue clear sky
I'm lost in sleep
Bubbles rising
Water in
Breathing out
Don't take my kin
I can't see
Lost in sound
Blurry faces
Screaming loud
Hold your breath
Don't take to much
All I feel
Is a sudden rush
Down we sink
Then deep and deep
Our lives forgotten
Our love we keep
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Eighteen. Macabre & Romance
The water is pushing me down and I cant breathe. I huff and blow but its no use. I cough and splutter and fill my cheeks with air. I am frozen and I lose my strength. I am winded, I can't breathe.
The ocean is icy Its embrace like a fist. We dive into a blackness I have tried to resist. Foam pulling me under I fight for a gasp And all the while you escape from my grasp.
I scream for help. My plea is drowned under tidal roars. I gasp for air, but choke on ice. The ocean pulls me to its depths, calling for me. I resist. I struggle for life.
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