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Bricks

The falling of bricks and stones,
To lay on the ground as bones,
From the shell of old,
the new arrives,
The cold passing of time
not a surprise...

A goodbye,
good riddance?
To an eye-sore...
a pittance?
Amongst the dust
and walls stained with moss,
Surely,
The time spent there is not really lost...
For bricks are only bricks, now,
But something is gone... somehow.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Beautiful piece

Hint of sad hun 😢 but good stuff 👍❤🌹

This is so beautiful.

Lovely...poignant! And yay, @naaviie poetry 😊😍💜

A gorgeous write my sweet 👏❤✨✨❤👏

A little bit sad reading between the lines. But still beautiful. 💚

@sarahgamal @leelee101 @HeatherAnne @Irrational_Kimmi @eddie12309 - wow, thank you! What nice comments to get back to after a day in the lab! It is a little sad, but hey - from the ashes... 😉

Aww does that mean loves no longer blossoming?😔

😱😱😱 he's not.....gone?

@eddie12309 @leelee101 - oh don't worry this really is about a building being knocked down! 😂

@naaviie phew 😍

@naaviie thank Christ for that! 👍😂

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@RichWithey - the old vet school building on the edge of campus!

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