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Day 56

Careful.

Don't - breathe -

Don't - even - blink.

The aquamarine water shimmered slightly as I reposition a leg that is starting to cramp. I cursed the ripples it made.

Come on... Come on... Just one...
How long must I wait...!

My stomach growls in protest at the same moment as a silver fish darts through the water I front of my feet. My spear pins it to the sandy seabed in a flash, a reflex.

"Yes!" I shout, joy flooding through my sun-cracked skin in a flush of blood and adrenaline.

I was getting better at this, I thought, letting a flood of dry sea air deep into my lungs.

My stomach could barely contain its excitement as the fish roasted in the fire, palm leaves curled and cracked. Bellowing out a soft grey smoke into the crystal sky.

I no longer looked to the sky. No one ever looked back, I was alone.

For good.

I stopped counting the days at Day 56 after the plane crash.
What was the point?
No one was coming.

So now it was always Day 56.

Fine, i think, with a huff. I tear into the steaming, white, plump flesh of the fish. It melted in my mouth, warmed my empty belly.

The sun was still high, so I brave a venture into the trees. The oppressive green clinging in too close, thick and dense around me. I shiver in the shade.

But coconuts are the prize, their sweet milk the only drinkable liquid I could find in the first few days here. Now they were water bottles, tools, building material, weapons, cooking pots and even fuel.

I just had to go through the jungle to get to the other cove, but there was always something watching - a presence at the edge of my vision.

I hurry through the dense shrub, twigs and leaves scratching my skin, tearing more holes in my sodden clothes.

But I made it, the bright light of the sun and the bleached sand of the coconut cove made me falter and blink before my eyes adjusted again.

I looked to the trees, but saw no coconuts, none fallen on the ground either. I was sure there was some yesterday...

I turn sharply, hearing a shout - muffled by the vegetation.
My mind reels, haunting the edge of insanity. But there it is again, carried on the lofty breeze - a shout.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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This is amazing Hun....please tell me you are doing more?....a fabulous read, gripping from start to finish!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

Ooooo....🌴🌴 ✈πŸ”₯ Robinson Crusoe meets Lost... ❀ awesome write hun. Is there more? πŸ‘β€πŸ’‹

@misslittleDHP @leelee101 - I had castaway and lost in my head πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ maybe more, maybe... πŸ˜‰ thank you guys 😘

This is really, really good! I'd love to read a survival island series! Hint hint 😜

@Jamtots great idea πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@misslittleDHP @Jamtots @leelee101 - it was my brother @Zmog3456 's idea! I'll have to see if he lets me continue it πŸ˜‰

This is brilliantπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@ren360 thank you Ren πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

Oh good a story. I hope he let's you continue. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

@eddie12309 - I'll bribe him with cookies πŸ˜‰

Wowza, I really liked that, more please Nic! πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ’œπŸŒ…

Oooooo very good β›³πŸŒ΄πŸ‚πŸƒπŸŒ΅πŸŒΎπŸ πŸŸπŸ³πŸ¬πŸ›πŸšβ˜€β˜”πŸŒ™πŸŒŠπŸ’πŸ—πŸŽπŸ˜±

@Irrational_Kimmi - haha really? I'll see what I can do

@naaviie yeah! I want to know who/what was shouting!!! 😳😊

@glen ooooh love the pictures! 😘

@Irrational_Kimmi - ah ha I best do another part then πŸ˜‰

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