LIFE

naaviie • 976 followers

We
tremble,
And fall,
D r i f t
d
o
w
n
wards,
Feel small,
RISE up
again,
Dance
In the rain,
Before
Plunging
In
Dark,
Unholy,
Unrestful,
Sleep...
Shaking, moving,
Lost in
un-awakening,
Climbing,
Fighting,

- STRIVING -

Upwards,
Yet,
knocked
back,
Time
And time,
And time,
Again.

Racing ladders,
Chasing dreams,
Falling in love,
Tearing at the seams,
Bursting in, bursting out,
Ripping up rule books,
Just glancing back -
For that one last look...

#emotional-journey #existential-poetry #general #human-struggle

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Comments & Feedback (9)

Irrational_Kimmi

Jan 5, 2013 at 9:40 AM

Great piece, and great take on 'life' ☺💜

Jan 5, 2013 at 9:57 AM

I get the feeling this is describing your life and its complicated emotions at present. But I may be wrong. Either way its a great piece. 💚

Jan 5, 2013 at 10:44 AM

@Irrational_Kimmi thank you 💚😘✨

Jan 5, 2013 at 10:45 AM

@eddie12309 - yeh I it is how life always seems to me. Especially at the moment. Thanks Eddie 💚😘✨

Jan 5, 2013 at 1:15 PM

beautiful shape amd content, so intense! like it!

Jan 5, 2013 at 1:51 PM

Mmm lovely stuff Nic. 👍❤😘

Jan 5, 2013 at 2:41 PM

@starkat37 @leelee101 - thank you!! 💚😘✨

Jan 5, 2013 at 2:51 PM

dont thank me! you wrote this piece! ifu get a negative comment,its because of jealousy

Jan 5, 2013 at 3:19 PM

@starkat37 😊

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