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Lonely Tree

#sixwords Improv @misslittleDHP

On the very edge of land,
Stands a bare, old tree so grand,
Golden leaves have fallen,
Its genes sent away in pollen,
A magnificent sight to see,
This great dormancy,
How his trunk stands tall,
And branches grow out in a scrawl,
Reaching out to the sky,
A perch for a passing jay or magpie,
He may stand on the edge,
No other trees around, not even a hedge,
Sometimes feeling quite alone,
The passing wind often makes him groan,
Too much time to stand and think,
The loneliness making his tree-heart sink,
The winter is tense and long,
And all too quiet without proper bird song,
But soon enough spring friends will return,
And for company he will no longer have to yearn.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (17)

Brilliant ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

@misslittleDHP - for the mixing pot!

@MrAlex thank you sir! ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜˜

@MrAlex and for RP - have a ๐ŸŒด

Really love this !!! ๐ŸŒด๐ŸŒด๐ŸŒด๐ŸŒด๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—, yu captured so much x

@DaddyDooDahs awe, thank you kindly sir! ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ˜˜

An honour and a pleasure fair maiden ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜˜

@DaddyDooDahs teeheehee ๐Ÿ˜˜๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ’šโœจ

@naaviie bowled over by you beauty, surely only a princess could write with so much heart ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’šโค

@DaddyDooDahs awe! You flatter me so! ๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ’š๐ŸŒน

Worth every word, thou dost speak'eth, only the truth...I am captivated ๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’˜๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

Great one!โœจ๐Ÿ‘โœจ

Very well written.

@DaddyDooDahs ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

@ckahn @VikingHorn - thank you both!! ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ˜˜

This is beautifully written...love it!

@misslittleDHP thank you! And for the RP ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’š

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