My hand
Is like
My heart,
An empty,
Echoing space,
Lost once,
Or twice,
In the emotional,
relationship,
Rat-race,
Misguided education,
Learnt too soon,
To believe lies,
About the stars,
And reaching the moon,
Beaten down,
Wearily,
Carefully plotted
Mistakes,
Crafted in age-old
Limestone,
But now a new lesson-
My heart is not my own,
My hand is guided,
By this ferocious,
Crimson beast,
Won't be over-ridden,
A voice no longer muffled,
Left alone or hidden,
Now my hand, my heart,
Are eager to learn,
Ready for initiation
To feel passion burn,
In this new world,
My voice is fresh,
(Fighting off the stage-fright)
Now i'm calling to you,
Saying, I am not just any girl,
In my hand there is space,
Space for your fingers to curl.
How did you like this story?
Your feedback helps naaviie understand what's working
@naaviie
23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.
Similar Stories
Will I be strong enough. Even when it's gonna be tough. Will I survive . Through a whole night. I'm used to feeling you near, Your presence always here.
55 words
A Change Of Heart
What do you do when you've broken your heart.
91 words
Dare To Love, Dare To Live?
Confused A bit bruised The past cannot be altered And the future doesn't deserve the punishment One step forward Two steps backward Dare to love, dare to live.
56 words
My Resolution.
Sometimes I sit and feel scared,. I feel so alone and unprepared,. Always in control of my destiny,. No one would expect any less of me,. I feel like I'm falling short,.
212 words
To Be...
I've always wanted to be somebody, to be somebody special, to be somebody you will notice, to be somebody you could love.
180 words
Changing Tides (I Need You)
Waiting. But I think time is standing still. I'm dreaming. Yet I seem to wake up unfulfilled. I fear the unknown. But can't wait till it's shown. Should I take those first steps.
152 words
Yesterday
Yesterday I was sad. Yesterday I was alone. Yesterday I was lovesick. Yesterday I was worthless. Yesterday i was broken. Today I am happy. Today I am surrounded with friends.
52 words
Loving Again
It feels like... I'm finally ready, you know. I feel happy I feel peaceful I feel prepared. I tried so long to be perfect: To gain control of it all, And wake up each morning with spirit and hope.
159 words
Comments & Feedback (20)
@naaviie πππ I know- but it would be pretty awesome if it wasn't! (I do not wish you lose your hand, though β) π
@MelchiorJ13 ππ can you lose a real hand or have you watched too much Paralympics? If someone is holding your hand, it is in their possession, on loan?
@naaviie aww sounds like you got it bad to me girl! Must be something going around on ole Opuss! π
Want to join the conversation? Sign in to leave a comment.