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Naked in the Rain (16+)

[inspired by @gazplend's Opuss under the same title]

Warm, tender drops,
Find my secret spots,
The one you trace,
At an increasing pace,
We sit and wait for the rain,
One hot day it soon came,
I slip my hands beneath,
Cotton will find it's release,
I'm naked and bare,
Flesh for you to share,
Run with me and grin,
Before I take you in,
We can dance and twirl,
Send the rain rushing in swirls,
Call my name,
In the hot, singing rain,
My skin is smooth and glossed,
I shine as you push me into the moss,
My body aches,
Pulses more as you make me wait,
Tease me to please me,
Bare back held against a tree,
I am empty as the air is full,
Come close, closer, I pull,
Drum like the rain, thrum to be mine,
Thunder is coming, fill me with brine.
Use clouds for clothes,
We will be open, naked, exposed,
Raw and unleashed, finally free,
Water, come, submit claim of me.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (20)

@gazplend - sorry this was rushed... πŸ’š

Still great! πŸ‘πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ‘

A mesmerising and seductive write...loved itπŸ’šβ€πŸ’šβ€πŸ’šβ€

Arrousigly nice

@ckahn @misslittleDHP @belgji - ooooh thank you muchly!! πŸ’šπŸ’š

@naaviie reckon you need that rain to help put the fire! πŸ’¦πŸ”₯ hot! πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@naaviie wow! I prefer your naked rain idea! Let it rain!! 😜😜😘

@leelee101 - spontaneous combustion 😜

@gazplend thanks for the inspiration πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

Very seductive, love it ❀

@sjw thank you sweetie πŸ’šπŸ’š

Great write hon, totally distracted my mornings dealings!! 😳😚😳

@DaddyDooDahs hahaha glad to hear it! πŸ’šβœ¨πŸ’š

Nothing like some lovin' in the great outdoors β˜€β˜”πŸ‘«πŸ”₯πŸ‘

@Fly10 mwah πŸ˜œπŸ’šβœ¨πŸ˜˜

Was this written from personal experience? πŸ˜‰

@Nom perhaps with a little poetic license thrown in, African wet season is much like this 😜

@Nom :) what have I done now?

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