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Next Week

Monday I asked for your hand,
As we danced before our wedding band,
Tuesday we lived our dreams and wishes,
You kissed me, called me your new 'Mrs',
Wednesday I held you when you cried,
And never once did I ask you why,
Thursday we let our children run free,
So they can roam, climb and fall from trees,
Friday we sit and breathe, just us again,
The noise is gone, a silent 'amen',
Saturday we still laugh and don't notice that we age,
Sunday you kiss me as I drift from my last page.

But that is next week,
Yesterday you shyly kissed my cheek,
Took my number, asked to dinner at last,
Tonight we'll passionately steam up the glass.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Really sweet πŸ‘πŸ’ what's this household challenge? I'm always a bus behind 😝

Lovely piece lady😌😘

@Fly10 - thanks - trying to keep up with challenges! πŸ’šπŸ˜˜

@ckahn - @Delilah started it, we have to write a piece in 24hrs about a named household object, today is glass. Deadline is 5pm i think. Going to be passed around. Host decides winner, winner is next host. Hope that helps! πŸ’š

Beautiful πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@misslittleDHP - thank you muchly m'lady and for kind RP πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

Oh I love this! Such a clever concept. 😍

@naaviie really good nic. Very well written πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@jojo72 - haha thanks! I hope I don't get disqualified, it doesn't concentrate on glass!

@leelee101 - thank you sir! πŸ’š

This is very nice, well done! ☺

@crowncottage - awe thanks!

Awww beautiful 😊 defo up there πŸ˜‰

@Delilah haha cheers sweetie

Lovely😘

@merlin1038 - thanks πŸ’š

This is one of your best poems! Seriously, the analogy of a week of days is beautiful.

Amazing concept Nic, just a sheet pleasure to read πŸ˜’πŸ’—πŸ’šπŸ˜˜

@Nom - ooh wow! Really!! Thank you, you do flatter me. πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

@DaddyDooDahs - hehe, I'll assume you meant 'sheer' and thank you very much! πŸ’šπŸ’š

Brilliant!

@naaviie xxxx

@lonelynutmeg98 - thanks sweetie πŸ’šπŸ’š

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