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I know, late again for #household, I'll catch up at some point I promise!

There was a clock,
as old as he,
it had been loosing time,
in the same way he'd loose his teeth,
or forget a word or rhyme.

It aged along with the old man,
each day the hands would slow,
and as he moved with difficulty,
the clock it seemed to know.

One day the old man took to bed,
his voice then lost all power,
the rusty clock still told the time,
but stopped chiming the hour.

The old man's heart began to fade,
his breath became a flutter,
and so the clock hands followed suit,
it's 'tick tock' sound did stutter.

And when the old man breathed his last,
and passed from this world on,
the clock did stop and no more would work,
as if it too had gone.

Obv inspired by My Grandfther's clock:)

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Comments & Feedback (6)

Aw Claire, 'tis lovely! Just a shame you can't tell the time... ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 haha ๐Ÿ˜‚ - Great poem Claire. I've yet to join in on this challenge, probably should at one point ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

@leelee101 hahaha, so true. @leelee101 @Jamtots it's lots of fun and good for inspiration!

@Clairabethy you're right Claire it is useful for inspiration. ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿป

Love this so much, great imagery, brilliant ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ•‘

@MelchiorJ13 thank you!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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