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Purple, Ethereal

The relief at my collapse is eternal,

Relax, the webs of emotion turned to train tracks in my mind,

Tumbling thoughts rolling, steaming into a brightened, flaming abyss of remembered desire,
Filtered love,
Faltered thoughts and streaming nights,

Remember my mouth and my touch because now the world is set to rights,

Forgive me my despair as I have faith to care,
Believe my words,

The incubate grasp of reality and poise is in a tumbling ethereal glow,
As purple halos crack and fall -

A tumbling release from a work too small,

Freedom is in the mind,

And your mind is mine.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Blimey nic that's a cracker. Well done sweetheart πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€πŸ‘πŸ’‹

Love. πŸ’š

Amazing piece that flows really well Nic!! Love it babe 😍😘

@leelee101 @HeatherAnne @smellyfingers - aww thank you ☺😜😘

Brilliant! Some really amazing lines in here!πŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒŸ

Super duper πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ’šβœ¨πŸ’šβœ¨

@ckahn @misslittleDHP - thank you ladies!! Appreciate the comments ☺☺😘😘

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