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You rip me,
Break me,
Bruise my skin,
Tear me apart,
Let that darkness in,
See my face, feel the black,
My smile, a prompt,
To unleash your attack,
I don't deserve it,
I don't feel it anymore,
Not remembering how you closed away every door,
Trapped in this loveless world,
Your fists the only touch,
Boiling over -
Becoming too much,
Too long being the victim,
My shell shattered
and discarded,
A soul sinking far within...

There is a c-r-a-c-k -
With that last smack
Across my nose,
From one too many blows,
A silent vow,
To stop your heavy hand now
And forever,

No more.

No more of this.
Kitchen knife in hand,
Your heart, my dear, I won't miss.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Excellent 🐑💨😖🐘💦😳🐠💨😖🏃💨😖🐠💨😖🐒💨😖🐛💨😖

@glen - whoa what a lotta flatulence! Thanks 😘

Great stuff, both at showing the demoralised pain suffering from domestic rage and also cos she's gonna rip his heart oot 👏👏👏👍

@naaviie 😜

@Burrfoot - that was the plan, horrid stuff 😓

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Woah that is some write Hun 😣😣😣😣

@naaviie I'm giving you two weeks to watch that film before I rewrite my story 😜

Brilliant 👍❤😘

Very powerful and thought provoking nice one :D

Amazing, very powerful!!! 😲

@cookiekitty45 @misslittleDHP @lonelynutmeg98 @Irrational_Kimmi - thanks guys, bit of a different one for me. 💚❤💙💜

@leelee101 - thank you sir! 💚😘✨

@glen - ooh errr - homework?!

@RichWithey - thank you Rich 💚😘✨

Cant believe I missed this! Awesome 💗💗💗

@sjw - awe thanks Sienna 💚💚

@naaviie your welcome and it's the winner 👏👏👏😘

@sjw - I just saw that! 😲😁

Well done! 😁👍

@pthasse 😁😁😁😁😁

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