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Taken

I watched her take you,
Skin ice cold, eyes blue,
Wrists captured,
Soul enraptured,
It was my fault,
Made you a victim of her assault,
I led the monster here,
So she could steal your air,
I didn't mean it,
Please don't submit,
What happened to us?
Did you peel off her dress?
Forgive me, sweetie,
But why are you so greedy?
I led her to our lair,
Where your heart lay bare,
Cold claws out to steal,
I can see her appeal,
You really went willingly,
Just serendipity,
I'm sorry, baby,
Sorry for this lady,
How I let you go,
And how you'll never know.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (22)

@MrAlex and @Jamtots thanks for the speedy reads and RPs - I always appreciate it 💚😘✨

Bittersweet!

@naaviie no problem 😊

@naaviie Welcome 😊 Great piece 👍

@MrAlex @Jamtots 💚😘✨

@Nom 🍧?

@naaviie is that an ice-cream?

Beautiful stuff my lovely 💙

Love it 💔💔💔

@Nom or sorbet?

@Delilah @Irrational_Kimmi thanks girlies!!! 💚💚

@NamesKill and @gazplend thanks for RPs!! 💚😘😘✨

@naaviie sorbet please! :)

@Nom 🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧

I like figurative writings, it's applicable in almost anything. Right here is an example of a good one for me. Fantastic idea I really enjoyed this😄

@milkeyedmender thank you muchly!! 😄 yes, it can apply to a few situations, but I know which one I was thinking of 💚 thanks for RP too 😘✨

@naaviie great!

@chy 💚✨

Really stunning😍😍

@misslittleDHP thank you!! Martini for the RP? 😘🍸

@naaviie mmmmmm yes please 🍸🍸one for me and one for you!💜

@misslittleDHP yey! Cheers! 🍸✨🍸

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