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Thin Ice

I can almost f e e l
you thinking of me,
That glint in your blue eyes,
It's like I can s e e,
You are here,
with me -
But not,
Drifting in my sapphire realm,
Thick with silver thoughts,
Learning...
Who you are, who I am,
Without reason,
Without plan,
I'm not thinking - I'm breathing,
Remembering you,
Your shy smile,
Tender touch,
I tread slowly,
Lightly,
On thin ice across the ocean,
The wind sends in a rush,
But I do not fall.
I do not fall,
The ice is not broken,
I do not fall,
Because there you are,
Arms wide open.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Love this and the format is ace πŸ’—β€πŸ’—πŸ’‹

Yes format is brilliant. Love itπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Aww. Sod the format. Just lovely πŸ‘β€β€β€πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹

Love it😊

Love this. Is the format a crack in the ice or a gentle wave of emotion? Or .... Oops neither 😘

@sjw @sarahgamal @leelee101 @mpallister24 - aw thank you very much β˜ΊπŸ’šβ˜ΊπŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨

@eddie12309 - a crack in the ice! I didn't think anyone would notice! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘

@naaviie ha. Do you think they thought it was random formatting πŸ˜‚

@naaviie @eddie12309 that's what I saw it as it ties in with the words πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@eddie12309 @sjw - wasn't sure, very pleased you guys noticed it though 😊😊😊

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