Hot tears
On a
cold face
Left to
run down
That narrow
place
The wind howls
And
Darkness
Scowls
The whistling
Emptiness
Of orange
glittering
Reflections
On wet ground
Now so wet
Now so drowned.
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23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.
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@Irrational_Kimmi - aw! - how long to go now? Uni is really tough but I'm ploughing on ๐ how's the job hunt?
@naaviie 6-8 weeks left. That's all! No job yet but I've had a few interviews ๐ I'll get there in the end. I think I've found Johnny a job though, somehow, before myself! Uni keeping you busy?
@Irrational_Kimmi - oh not long!! That time has just flown ๐ that was clever finding Johnny something before yourself! Aren't you both teachers - steal his job! ๐๐ oh yes, uni is relentless plus friends, family and boyfriend means I have barely a moment to myself!
@naaviie I have to look after my man ๐ We are both teachers but he's trying for a paid studentship at uni to do a masters and PhD in educational research. I'm not smart enough to get that job!
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