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Stains In Red

A very dark winter night
Over thirty years ago
Was walking by himself
In the newly fallen snow

Two lights approached
Too fast for him to see
Red stains hit the trees
At once he ceased to be

Appears when it gets dark
You know that he is dead
Lurks inside your mind
Waits beneath your bed

Standing by the roadside
A man without a face
Lips were sewn together
With a razor and a lace

He's smiling at you now
And chuckles all the time
Blood all over his hands
Carrying his spine

Laughs at all the irony
His father loved a sip
At night he went out driving
Now your blood will drip

For all that he has felt
Now you'll feel his pain
Rip you at the chest
Slice you at your vein

See that one red spot
You'll learn to cry in fear
You'll see him in your dreams
His scream you now will hear

niixxz

@niixxz

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😱 Scary! Great rhyme and imagery in this one Nic!

Really scary stuff😳 Great write👏👏👏👏

☝☝☝ what they said. Another great one

Wow...yikes the imagery had me scared...fabulous flow...fabulous write ✨👏😱✨👏😱✨👏😱✨👏😱✨

@Irrational_Kimmi Thank you! And thanks for the RP 😘

Wow that's a bit dark and I was just off to bed too! 😱😂😂

@Stablish 👻👻👻 Haha thanks mate! And for the repost! Aaand for the follow 😄👍

@niixxz always a pleasure 😘

@Jamtots Thanks mate!

@misslittleDHP Haha boo 👻 Thank you 😊💐

Thought I already was to be honest, when I realised I wasn't I had to really. Your an awesome poet👏👏👏👏

@crowncottage I wrote while sitting in the car today, driving through a forrest. Kept staring at the trees by the side of the road and imagined if someone would just be standing there 😳 Anyway, goodnight 👻😊💤✨

@Stablish Oh thanks... That means a lot coming from you!

@misslittleDHP @crowncottage Thank you both for reposting! Still remember first time you both read something of mine. I was soooo happy. I'll remember that and you'll always be two of my absolute favorite people on here ❤

@niixxz thanks and I still think you are an amazing talent and deserve it! 😘

You notice I am still up! 😱 Not really, I can't resist a documentary about Queen! 😂

Awesome very scary 😱😘

Umm scary but an amazing poem

@niixxz Amazing poem but a bit scary! 😺

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