Ok, so I tried:
It didn't work.
I cried,
And boy did it hurt.
Gave my heart,
You didn't see.
Or maybe you did?
But it couldn't be.
I do wonder,
Could it last?
Our little story,
Hardly too fast.
A few years,
Still not enough.
Tried to speak out,
It was tough.
I loved you.
Plain as day.
Did you too?
I'm not to say.
I do wonder,
Are you there?
If I told you,
Would you care...
(again fictional)
by veraΒ©
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"Being happy doesn't mean that everything is perfect. It means that you've decided to look beyond the imperfections."
Torn apart Should have known from the start That I am destined to have a broken heart Tears falling For loneliness is crawling Pain is here, no longer stalling.
My love to you is pure. My heart for you is true. I think I need a cure. Cause loving you makes me blue. I gave to you my love. I gave to you my heart. And you still can't feel my love.
I give you my all and it's not enough,. You're love for me is just a bluff,. Poured my heart and soul into loving you,. Hoping just one day you'd love me too,. That hope has turned to ashes,.
Love. Is not. Attainable. And lust. Is so. Available. And I am just. So breakable. With feelings. That shatter. So shakeable. My trust. Is not. Attainable. Love is not. Available. I'm not alright.
Dear heart of mine. I told you he is not yours or mine. But you fell for him so quick. And now look at the broken pieces I have to pick. Dear heart of mine. I told you to slow down for a while.
Love touched me But I fled Don't want to see What lies ahead Faster and faster ... run Lying about another love Lying about you not being the one Faster and faster ...
Do you think that because you gave up on me, That I have forgiven. Haven't you realised how much pain I am in. To love somebody wholly, And to be neglected by them is damaging.
Can you forgive my love. Was it placed to wrongly. When push comes to shove, I know we both felt strongly.
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