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Black Lace

I have been asked, by a person whom shall remain nameless, to write something of a "black lace" story. I had to ask myself, and it turns out its erotic fiction.
Does anyone, as you guys would be the ones reading it, think that's a good idea?
Also my use of language can be somewhat graphic...as in I am not, and never have been offended by swear words. And I'm unsure I could work such a story correctly. If you don't understand what I mean, read Stan Chapter four. Also how far can I push it until it becomes porn? I don't know. I have never read anything like that before. Anyone want to offer me some advice before I just plough straight in there. No pun intended....

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Comments & Feedback (13)

Don't do it, it's the mark of an amature

@riczero lol!!! Good point! I dunno, maybe that kinda thing is best left in porn magazines, as my use of language would probably make it top shelf reading

Also how far could it go? I mean a lot of te people on here are under 18...@seamonster can you shed any light on that? I don't want to break terms and conditions.

@puffy1980 I think it would be fun to write for yourself but it's a fine line between the art of writing and the crudeness of porn

@shanwan indeed. Which is why I am a little worried about it, Art and smut are two different animals. Although would be fun to write, taking me out of my comfort zone

@puffy1980 absolutely! I think a challenge is always a good way of pushing yourself! Perhaps write whatever feels best, then tweak it if you feel it's too much?

@shanwan yeah good idea. Maybe a weekend project, as with work, the kids and Stan, I have little time to devote to it

Why do they want it? I don't see that as your style at all?! I don't really think Opuss should have an erotica section when it's open to all ages. I cringe sometimes at the content of stories when I notice a 12 year old has written them.

@Ria1984 I know! Some of the more erotic stuff on here shouldn't be read by under 16's let alone written by them. I suppose it's more of a challenge for me then anything else, see if I can do it. Not sure I can though

@puffy1980 I agree with @Ria1984. There are a lot of youngsters on here. Although I'd like to see how your writing style does an erotica, maybe opuss isn't the place?

@becominghuman thinking the same. I dunno. Maybe it's just a sign of the times how much this kids are sexed up...god I sound old...

Read some of @redfae stories they have a couple like that

But there are some kids on here like my brother @callz is only 9

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