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Quiet

Something's not right
Something's a miss
It's just like
Someone's taking the piss

Can't put my finger on it
But it seems to have lost its shine
Just doesn't feel the same
Maybe it's me not walking the line

It's just so quiet
Like a grave at night
Suppose it's better then
When everyone itches for a fight

But something isn't right
Opuss doesn't feel the same
I still love it tho
Just don't know who to blame

puffy1980

@puffy1980

Sick mind. Letting my dark passenger run free. Kik: puddy1980

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Comments & Feedback (8)

I'm to hungover to notice โ˜•

@glen lol

@puffy1980 good write mate. It's been a little quiet hasn't it? ๐Ÿ˜Š

@glen have some more โ˜•โ˜•โ˜• mate ๐Ÿ˜Š

It's definitely been quiet! Nice poem ๐Ÿ’ž

@leelee101 @sjw thanks. Been really quiet, alittle worrying

@puffy1980 normally I can't keep up with the feed!

@puffy1980 don't worry mate just keep going ๐Ÿ‘

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