First thing I start work on when i start revising Oberon is characters. I need better arcs and deeper emotional connections with each other and the reader
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I'm a writer working on my second novel. Started writing when I was a kid, got serious when I was 16 and submitted my first poem to a competition and was published in a Texas high school anthology. I write poetry, music, play a little guitar, and I'm trying my hand at screenwriting.
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