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Dark Clouds

Dark clouds above my head
Memories of words practiced but never said
Sat in this Church
My stomach starts to lurch
First time I've been here
Since January this year
When we practiced vows
In that dress I felt wow
But it was my pretence
And being young was my only line of defence
This place it daunts me
And my thoughts haunt me
What could have been
More bruises unseen?

So sitting in this dark black place
I can remember that look upon your face
It terrifies me in a certain way
That I look I won't forget ... Forever and a day
Those dark clouds have overshadowed a day
That should have been perfect in every single way

sara_lou

@sara_lou

Hi I'm 25 I love English literature and language. I love travel. Kik- saralouise88 Instagram sara_louise_88 Twitter @SaralouiseD88

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Comments & Feedback (28)

This is great stuff β€πŸ˜‰

@lauraessex thanks Hun πŸ’œ

@leelee101 calmer and now vented! ❀😘

@stablish thanks for the RP 😊

@lauraessex thanks for the RP him πŸ’œ

Should be Hun not him #Autocorrectsucks

@sara_lou I know I tried to put soz and it came up sizzling

@lauraessex oh no! In the wrong context that could have been embarrassing

@sara_lou yeah I know 😳

@sara_lou good to get it out hunny. You practised vows

@sara_lou grrr... And it didn't come off? Understand the rant πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 yeah guess better to get out before it was official πŸ’œπŸ˜˜

@leelee101 thanks for the repost hunni πŸ˜˜πŸ’œ

@minxyMolly thanks for the RP πŸ’œ

@sara_lou no problems chick, hope ur ok xxx

@minxyMolly I'm good thanks Hun being there resurfaced memories that I'd repressed for like 7months πŸ’œ

@sara_lou oh dear :-/ hate it when that happens 😘😘

@minxyMolly yeah but least the Church was only 45mins of hell sat in beer garden now... This is more like it 😘😘

@sara_lou hahaha yh have a good drink πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„ cheers many up 😘😘

@minxyMolly yeah it's all good got my best buddy vodka redbull... Yum yum 😘

Masterpiece πŸ’šβœ¨

@naaviie thanking you Hun and cheers for the RPπŸ’œπŸ’—β€

No problemo, sorry I've been missing stuff πŸ’šπŸ’š

@naaviie it's ok hun, you ok? πŸ’—πŸ’œ

Yup, just on holiday so quite busy. Yourself? πŸ’š

@naaviie yeah tad bit confused but throwing myself into preparation for start of new school year!!! 2weeks to go! πŸ’œ

Ah I hope it all works out! Always good to be kept busy ☺

@naaviie it is that stops overthinking situations! Have a fab holiday hun πŸ’œ

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