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I found someone
Who looks the same
Talks the same
Moves the same
Way we did
when to all
Intent and purpose
We were kids

I found a girl
Who drinks the same
Way you did
Before our tracks
Our train and lack
Of love - grown faint
Drew your charm to change

I'm blinded by insistent prints
Potatoes carved with images
Of memories gone, past
The last of which
Depicts in-sit
Your vulpine form
Arranged at slant
Across a restaurant bench
And can't become
Or bring myself
To want much more
than that

What I have
Most men would die for
Heart, warm home
Respondent call
To touch and love
Respite

Yet I found someone
Who seems just like you
Reads just like you
Listens like you
Even though
You've ceased to share
A life with me
At all

I found a girl
Who dresses like you
Messes like you
Confessed like you
That there was
A certain spark
Which may
Or not
Be there

J. x

Zoodark

@Zoodark

25y/o songwriter hailing from South London. www.myspace.com/deafyetiband

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Excellent poem!

@shanwan Thankyou, pretty fire headed lady! J x

Kind of sad she was so easily replaced.

Who saha ha, who said anything about being replaced? @Nom

@Zoodark it's just the way I read it. On a re-read I get two more possible understandings- 1) the same girl, but she has changed, no longer the girl she was, 2) you're a cross dresser.

I hate this keyboard!

@Zoodark awesome stuff buddy. Lmfao @ @Nom number 2 haha

@Nom I'll let you decide although I wouldn't rule out option two :OP

@smellyfingers @Zoodark hmm, well you do seem to have a fetish for leather boots as well...

@Nom I shall not deny my love for them. I just like pretending to be a cowboy...or Dick Whittington.

@Zoodark if you say so. 😜

@Zoodark I'd love your criticism on my latest 'works'!

@Nom shall take a peek! J x

Have to say the 'leather boots' fetish thing is a pretty bizarre and cool motif.

@renagade146 Is everyone aware of my vice now? It's not as though I posted about it online on a...oh, wait. Dammit. :OP

@Zoodark haha! Guess you've really put your foot in it!

@renagade146 ha ha ha ha, if it's leather, nice and boot shaped then I'd like to!

Yeah that's pretty much standard criteria for a boot. I'll continue to watch out for any more accidental references and stay privately amused :]

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