This massive empty house
So quite like a mouse
Felt I needed to double check the doors
Not got to the extremes of checking under the floors
Double bolts
Walking upstairs I stop and halt
Did I turn the cooker off
Did I just hear someone cough?
I know it's all in my head
Worrying though when your all alone?
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Comments & Feedback (6)
I know this feeling, my mind goes into to overdrive when I'm on my own and we have creaky floorboards 😱😂
@sjw was my first night alone since last December! ... Got too used to having dad and his wife around 😱💪💪
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