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Our Last Stance

Shut this down
Burn it to the ground
Had enough of frowns
So tired of being love bound
Fight is what we do
To me you can't ever be true

This is our last stance
A final dance
No longer stuck in your trance
Watch me walk away
No baby I won't stay

Fed up of lies
Every broken tie
Spent all this time believing
Never really seeing
That the truth was there
You didn't really care

This is our last stance
A final dance
No longer stuck in your trance
Watch me walk away
No baby I won't stay

So I'm closing the final curtain
This time I'm for certain
No changing my mind
To my heart I should be kind
I'm shutting this shit down
No baby I won't frown

This is our last stance
A final dance
No longer stuck in your trance
Watch me walk away
No baby I won't stay

Gone is us
Love caught the last bus
Lost at sea downing in fears
I've cried my last tears
I realised you weren't the one
And now it's shut down... Gone.

Sara Louise Dobson © 2012

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Comments & Feedback (16)

Great stuff, strong and powerful ✊💜😊

Really well written

💜😘💚

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks hunni 😊❤😘for the RP

@Stablish thanks Paul 💜😘for the RP

Ooo that's an empowering write sweetheart 😘 good to let it out, eh? 👍❤💋

@leelee101 yeah very good ... Happy smiley Sara-Lou now 😄😊😘❤for the RP 😘

Very strong. Well done really😘😘

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@sarahgamal thanks hunni 😘❤

@RichWithey I'm good just had some pent up crap to offload ... Finding out your ex was cheating on you for the last 8months of your r'ship brings back things you'd tried to forget! All in the past... Enjoying being young, free and single!! :) x thanks for the concern babes x

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@RichWithey cheers babes looking to the future and just generally living life and being happy :) x

Whoa go girl! ✌ don't need that scumbag... cough better off without him! 💚💚 this could be a song too, great rhythm!

@naaviie cheers Nic :) x and yeah when I was writing it I could sort of hear a melody and rhythm to it! 😘❤

I could hear one when reading it 🎶🎶🎶

Cool 😘❤💜

@naaviie glad you like Hun 😘❤

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