Pictures hanging on the wall
One by one they start to fall
Try to put some up but not all
Pictures falling on the floor
As I walk towards the door
I know I don't belong here anymore
Pictures falling with no sound
Turning to ashes as they touch the ground
Got to move can't turn around
Pictures hanging on the wall
One by one they start to fall
But I realize that I am in none at all
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A 32 mother of 2 .
I feel so lost. Like an astronaut in space. Drifting at a great cost. Through this desolate place. I feel so isolated. The only astronaut here. My fears emancipated. My weakness clear.
(a sequel to @Fly10 , Returned Goods) I am afraid we are closed for returns for the day. This item can not be restocked, anyway.
Tornado and the calm sea. Mean the world to me. Spin around. Then, settle down. A laugh from a frown. Tornado and the clam sea. Mean everything to me. Twist around. Then, calming sounds.
I once held a precious treasure, a fragile beauty in my hands. A prism of reflective pleasure, with gentle radiance it shone. It was formed with compassion, in a furnace fired with love.
I'm in muddy waters All is not clear Water of disillusion Will it cost me dear.
Imagination spills over Smiles turn to laughter Thoughts frozen in time Words fill the racing mind Archived memories replay Dust them off for today Yes I remember now You did indeed use a smile Once...
I am falling down. I am falling and I don't know when to stop. I don't know how I got here. Or how high this is. But I am falling from the top. I am getting sleepy. But I can't sleep.
Under the moonlit starry night sky. She shivers and shakes with a tear in her eye. The bridge that she stood on, many times through the years. She's one step away from, but that step she can't bear.
@sarahgamal Interesting! I couldn't quite pick up the structure you were using. Also is a tad too ambiguous? Though that
@Lhyrre I am not sure what u mean by structure but I usually write the words that flies in my head if that makes sense. Might be ambiguous but could mean different things to different people. Open to several interpretations. Appreciate ur comments and thank u for reading it ππ
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