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The Woman

The pain that stormed my heart
Was worse than a poisoned dart
"I love another" he said
"Whatever we had is dead"

Lost my soul
Lost my heart
Lost my all
But I still asked for a new start

"I'll stay and make things right" he said
Maybe we'll start over from before we were wed
Strangers now meeting at a crossroad
Promising together we'll carry the heavy load

Days, months and years passed
Still together just like I asked
The roles I assigned kept our home together
But our hearts were empty, light as a feather

The broken love was long gone
The lust we share can't bring the trust withdrawn
And yet I still want you to stay
Even though I see her in your eyes each day
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Complementing the piece I wrote earlier: "The other woman". Nonfictional really except the ending.

sarahgamal

@sarahgamal

A 32 mother of 2 .

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Comments & Feedback (17)

Poignant indeed! πŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ’—πŸ‘πŸŒŸ

@ckahn πŸ˜” I think I like it better than "the other woman" piece. It was easier to write as well. Thanks Kristina for rp πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’

If it's nonfiction

Nonfictional Sarah? 😒😒 but well done hun. πŸ‘β€πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 no 😒 Lee. The real ending was betterπŸ˜‰ told u before I know when to fold my cards 😊

@sarahgamal and kisses for rp 😘😘

@sarahgamal good girl, glad to hear it. πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

Awww Sarah, hope you're ok!!!! Xx

@minxyMolly am ok. Chapter closed a while backπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜ thank u for rp 😘

@sarahgamal that's good, how is everything in Egypt :) and my pleasure :) xx

@minxyMolly upside down really. But the cities on the Suez Canal started civil disobedience hoping it will spread

@minxyMolly loving the pic by the way ❀

Love the ending!

@sarahgamal how is it going so far? And thank you :) I like yours as well sas where did you capture it?!! ❀

@pennygirl21 thank u 😊

@minxyMolly am not sure which one u see. I got my purple butterfly on the phone and the one with someone standing infront of police force on iPad. Butterfly is the tattoo and the other one I didn't take, it was a pic at the beginning of revolution in 2011 that was circulated online

@sarahgamal umm both now lol was the person in front of the police very strong photo, and I do really like ur tat saz :) x

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