Here For You | Chapter 1

sguga • 118 followers

Hey guys :D
I started writing a story called 'Reunited' but I changed the name to 'Here For You'! Also I changed all
The characters names! I'm gonna start the story from the beginning :)
Hope you like it
Enjoy! ;D

"Grab my hand now, grab it, grab it now before you fall! Please you cant leave me!"
The earth rumbled with every pleading word I screamed out as rocks crumbled and withered away from the edges of the bottomless cliff.
"I'm sorry…Kiera...I can't…I'm too tired…I've been holding on for…so long…I don't think…I can move anymore…" she choked coughing in between words.
"No don't say that! You can do it I know you can. Just reach out for my hand and I'll pull you up!" I screamed in despair as my tears rushed down my cheeks.
"No…don't waste…your time on me…go…go save your self, find help on the way…I'll be here…I'll wait for you..." using all her strength she looked up looking half dead as she stretched a weary muddy smile on her innocent face. Suddenly her head collapsed down and her grip slid of the bloody rock and she fell deep into the darkness...

#adventure #cliff-hanger #friendship #rescue #survival #tragedy

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Reunited | Part 1

Hey guys this is a glimpse of my new story I've made up!. Hope you like it and please comment. Tell me what I need to work on and what I'm doing well at!. Tell me if I should carry on with it.

Comments & Feedback (6)

Jul 22, 2012 at 5:21 PM

Nice, though it's too short to say anything else about it, but I think you have yet beginnings of a good book

Jul 23, 2012 at 10:40 PM

@awesomeannie thanx 😊 and I also think its too short but I can't help it! :(

Jul 24, 2012 at 6:45 AM

Yeah, anyway, it's hard writing on a iPhone/itouch

Jul 24, 2012 at 9:06 AM

@awesomeannie @awesomeannie yeah it is! :( but oh well! ;)

Aug 7, 2012 at 5:20 PM

Awww 😔

Aug 7, 2012 at 7:36 PM

@magicmilkshake I know... But keep reading 👍

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