Hey guys this is a glimpse of my new story I've made up!! Hope you like it and please comment! Tell me what I need to work on and what I'm doing well at!! Tell me if I should carry on with it!
PART #1
"Grab my hand now, grab it, grab it now before you fall! Please you cant leave me!"
The earth rumbled with every word I said as rocks crumbled and withered away from the edges of the cliff.
"I'm sorry…Gabby...I can't…I'm too tired…I've been holding on for…so long…I don't think…I can move anymore…" she choked coughing in between words.
"No don't say that! You can do it I know you can. Just reach out for my hand and I'll pull you up!" I screamed in despair as my tears rushed down my cheeks.
"No…don't waste…your time on me…go…go save your self, find help on the way…I'll be here…I'll wait for you" using all her strength she looked up looking half dead as she stretched a weary muddy smile on her innocent face. Suddenly her head collapsed down and her grip slid of the bloody rock and she fell deep into the darkness...
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