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Don't You Try To Climb It

Not the pleasantest of stories ahead, just keep that in mind.

The adamant girl makes her way,
The boy follows at her side,
An allegiance he'll always stay,
They see the tree stood with elegance, pride,
A warning against tampering or climbing engraved,
It's crudely carved, but she ignores, foolishly brave,
She climbs first up so dangerously high,
He's following her lead, ever so near by,
But who follows behind him?
Who's climbing, decided not on whim?
The two children make way toward,
They've not noticed another on board,
They climb each branch taking care of foot,
Hand on yet another branch is put,
But someone- something
Is following,
Following the children so young,
Taking the branches rung by rung,
Stalking its prey, laughing inside,
Not a whisper or sign of it implied,
But then
They stop when
The creature starts scratching upon the branch below,
A twisted sign with claws he does draw,
One of a dead corpse lying
Against the tree bark crying.

A few days late a gardener ventures past,
Coming past the tree dead last,
Sardonically ironic notifying the sight,
He nearly spurts sick, scared for life,
He sees two lifeless children lying,
Against the tree bark crying.

shaheenashapeenur

@shaheenashapeenur

Hi my name's Shaheena, or shapeenur, whatever floats your boat, whatever grinds your h- I mean. Yeah. Whatever floats your boat. I've recently been described as a 'social recluse' while in a social situation, so. I like, no, love writing, I particularly LOVE writing and reading poetry; I'd really appreciate if you checked out any of my works. :).

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Wow, a brilliantly crafted, although twisted tale.

@dylan23 Thank you very much😊, we've been doing gothic horror and I decided on writing something a little disturbing

@yikici, thanks for the lovely repost😊❤

Uh-oh, this is creepy, yet written so well. Gave me the shivers. This would be great for @RichWithey 's #nightdwellers tag methinks ☺😘✨

@yikici really? Well then I shall tag😄 and thanks, that's the of feel I was trying to provoke😊

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@shaheenashapeenur it's good stuff ☺ and you're most welcome @RichWithey

@RichWithey Thankyou and for the great repost👍😄 can I just ask what the nightdwellers tag is about? I'm curious to know(:

Love his very creepy 👏👏👏😘

@sjw Thank you😊❤ and for the great repost

Brilliant post, really impressed by it 👏

@Jamtots Thanks, I'm glad you liked it😃

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