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Knock At The Door (Version 2)

Hang on, mate...
Someone just knocked
At my door. No -
I'll stay on the phone...

Bloody lock is stiff again.

Only a prank caller.
Yup.There was no-one there.
Yeh.. Happens a lot round here.
There's these teens
Who live on the corner of -

Shit! Did you hear that?
Made me jump!
Nah, I'm fine.
They're tapping...
Tapping on the window.

No. Can't see anyone.

Definitely no-one.
Moon's out.
It's bright enough, even
Through the fog.
Little shits.
So ... Friday. Is Stokes coming?

Wait a sec, mate.

PISS OFF HOME
OR I'M CALLING THE POLICE.
Yes, they're still at it.
Trying to scare me now.
No, sort of heavy, slow knocks.
On the door. LITTLE FREAKS!

I was too busy trying
To get Nicola into bed
When I was their age.
I know mate, but
At least I tried!
Shut your mouth -
You did not!
She told me you didn't.

Fuck!
Still there, Dave?
Dropped the phone -
One of them had his hand
Right through my
Letter box!
Trying to reach the fucking latch
By the looks of it.

This has gone beyond a joke.
I need to go and sort this out.
Yes, outside. Police?
Get lost. I'll handle this myself.
Bloody kids. Be right back.

Cheap, shitty lock. Agh.

Right, where are you then,
Big men! Come into the light
Where I can see you.
COME ON. Cowards.

Too chicken-shit to come any..
Hey! Dave! You bastard.
You scared the crap out of me.
You're paying for the curry after that
Little stunt.
Fucking mobile phones.

wolfie

@wolfie

The Octoberman. All I need is a bottle of Talisker, a keyboard and you. Facebook: Nikarkham www.nikarkham.co.uk

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Comments & Feedback (17)

Hahahaha awesome ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜‚

Thanks Nicola

Bloody hell, grown up BIG SHITS... I would serve them an extra hot vindaloo after this!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ›๐Ÿ›๐Ÿ›๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ˜œ

I mean.... Scary! ๐Ÿ˜œ little buggers wouldn't get me in to bed!

@michga lol.

@naaviie just realised the whole name thing. This version's actually a Marxist commentary on the neo-fascist categorisation of the underclasses

Ok.... Too smart for me, what is that in English?

@naaviie I just made all that up to make it sound better

@wolfie @wo

@naaviie I just made all that up. To make the piece sound impressive. In an ironic way

Oh! Haha, well, you do have a way with words.

Who needs friends like that! Mind you I'm a bit of a prankster ๐Ÿ˜œ

@naaviie just not always the right way :-)

@sjw sounds like fun

It is! I think I inherited it from my dad he's the prankster king drives my mum mad lol ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sjw your house must never be dull. Brilliant

Think I like this version better!๐Ÿ˜‰

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