I think back on my life,
I hate everything that I now am,
I've been through a fair strife,
I've not given all that I can,
I hate everything I have become,
I hate the shadows on my arms,
I hate all that I've done,
I've fallen for all the charms,
Nothing can part me from my hate,
Nothing can and nothing ever will,
I am forever left in this dreaded state,
Regrets torture me till I lay still,
I am not who I ever wished to be,
I am everything I did hate; I am me.
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Hi my name's Shaheena, or shapeenur, whatever floats your boat, whatever grinds your h- I mean. Yeah. Whatever floats your boat. I've recently been described as a 'social recluse' while in a social situation, so. I like, no, love writing, I particularly LOVE writing and reading poetry; I'd really appreciate if you checked out any of my works. :).
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@sarahgamal I was writing this for a friend who's struggling, βΊ, she asked me to write her a poem from her point of view, she told me how she felt as I put it into a poem :), but thanks for the advice all the same(:
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