Mystic eyes glitter in the moonlight,
You're the only thing in my line of sight,
So sincere yet devious,
Too strange from others seen previous,
Even a glimpse of your beauty does surprise,
Rendering such thoughts, staring at the prize,
I will leniently let you go,
Only, you're further than a pebbles throw,
Utter passion seeps through me,
Such beauty mystery can be.
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Hi my name's Shaheena, or shapeenur, whatever floats your boat, whatever grinds your h- I mean. Yeah. Whatever floats your boat. I've recently been described as a 'social recluse' while in a social situation, so. I like, no, love writing, I particularly LOVE writing and reading poetry; I'd really appreciate if you checked out any of my works. :).
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@yikici Thanks:3, I wrote the poem whilst listening to thriftshop so I'm glad it ended up making sense:Lπππ
@shaheenashapeenur it does make sense and you were very quick in the draw to come up with this poem -so soon after it's been announced. It was like 5-10! lol ππβ¨
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