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Blue

Oh, honey,
You can't deal with advice?
You say you think of suicide,
Because they're not very nice?

Not quite the words you used,
But I won't go into that.
I simply think you're pathetic,
I pity you pat pat

You'd rather broadcast it here
Than sort everything out.
You don't deserve your place,
People like you make me shout.

You can't deal with criticism?
Okay, shut up, good for you.
Seriously, get off Opuss,
You're making us all feel blue...

sian_

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My posts are various inspiration for absolutely anything lying around. And I like seals.

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pat pat :3

@Bobdimmer Fab isn't it ๐Ÿ˜น

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