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...It's not love.

*contains one swear word.

Why can't you see he wont change,
you'll always be a victim of this 'mans' rage.

It's not love that he shows,
whilst using his fists to dish out his blows.

His words aren't kind,
he's just screwed with and fucked up your mind.

Your not to blame,
he should be the one bowing his head in shame.

He wants to control you,
he doesn't know how lucky he is to have you.

Your beautiful inside and out,
gentleness escapes him all he does is shout.

Your worth so much more than this,
don't be blinded by his good looks and lustful kiss.

I hope you'll find the strength to walk away,
I know then the sun will shine for you each and everyday.

No matter what I'm always here,
hoping one day I won't have to watch your tears.

But you have to see he won't change,
you'll always be the victim of this 'mans' rage.

For H xxx

sjw

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Comments & Feedback (24)

Brilliant piece, very touchingπŸ˜’πŸ‘

I hope your friend gets help and courage to leave. 😞

@cperry thank you πŸ’”

@eddie12309 I hope so to..but she still believes she can change him πŸ˜₯πŸ’”

Oh gosh, she's still with him then? πŸ˜–πŸ˜–πŸ˜°πŸ˜°

β€πŸ’”β€πŸ’”πŸ’” is this your friend? X

@naaviie yes sadly πŸ˜₯ thank you for the RP πŸ’—πŸ’

@minxyMolly yes it is hun, and she's not reached her breaking point yet..she claims he loves her πŸ˜₯

@sjw πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜” hope she breaks out of it soon! You ok? 😘

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@RichWithey that's my fear for her, but thankfully he doesn't want kids at the moment..It so hard isn't it like you say all we can do is support them she's knows she can stay with us if she leaves because I think that's her worry to that he will harass her, she talks about leaving and then he does some huge gesture and she's back to square one! πŸ˜₯πŸ’” hope your friend comes to her senses babe x

@RichWithey thanks for the RP 😘🍻

@minxyMolly yes I'm ok hun, it's just I spoke to her earlier she cancelled a shopping trip I offered to go round and she said no..she only ever does that when he's laid into her πŸ˜₯

@sjw isolating her from her friends 😞 hate people like that, has she seen outside help, to help her break out of it x

@minxyMolly no she doesn't think she needs help she thinks she can change him..

@sjw πŸ˜”πŸ˜žπŸ˜”β€πŸ˜˜

I have seen it happen and it's happened to me....it takes guts and strength and a ton of self belief that these monsters have stripped away .....all you can do is not give up on her and pray that she gets the strength to leave ....thinking of you my sweet....πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”

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@RichWithey it's better for her in the long run if he doesn't want to know...hope she finds someone that deserves her pinning after him, but I guess we can't control who we fall in love with πŸ˜”x

@misslittleDHP thank you Kim for your lovely words I remember you saying you had been in this situation, I'm guessing its like most things when your in the situation you don't see it for what it really is...glad you got out πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’—

@misslittleDHP mwaah for the RP πŸ’

@sjw that's exactly it Hun ....you don't grasp that it's wrong....everyone has different tolerant levels....and it's only when that level is either reached or forcibly reached eg you end up seriously hurt...before that time, all that's being said to you just doesn't compute....my time to leave was when he hit me whilst pregnant...it literally is like walking out of fog....I really really hope your friend wakes up Hun πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

@misslittleDHP I'm so glad you left then hun..big hugs πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ˜˜πŸ’

Oh dear! Change? The best psychotherapist in the world with unlimited prescriptions can't change anyone who doesn't want (hell, truly strive) to change themselves.

@VikingHorn I know! Hopefully she'll realise it soon πŸ˜”

@sjw I truly hope so, too.

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